Ahhhhh!!! On a sunny day me and my best friend Katalina went to the pool’s because it was so hot, like we were burning up in to pieces. Once we got everything organised we started to walk to the pools. When we got there we were like ‘WOW” water was splashing everywhere..
When we got back from the pools we went to Sylvia Park to watch 'Brave', it was funny because when they turned into bears they looked cute but when they turned back into humans they were running around naked. When the movie was finished we went back home and went for a shower, then got dressed to go to bed. ZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!
1 comments:
Hi Oshyne,Its me Venetia,I like your story because you had a lot of detail in it.Keep up the great work.ONE DAY YOU MIGHT BECOME AN AUTHOR......Venetia
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